[EM] Declaration wording refinement

[Richard Fobes]

I have made this edit (of a single sentence) in the original Google Docs 
version of the Declaration, and in the copy here:

   http://www.votefair.org/declaration.html

I think it's now in its final form.

As before, if anyone who already signed it does not like the minor 
changes, please speak up.

Again, thank you Kristofer Munsterhjelm!

Richard Fobes


On 10/16/2011 12:47 AM, Kristofer Munsterhjelm wrote:
> Richard Fobes wrote:
>> How about a wording such as this:
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>> "Unanimously we agree that all of these supported methods are
>> significantly better than plurality voting, and we endorse using them
>> in governmental elections."
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>> This wording could replace the following sentence:
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>> "Every person signing this declaration supports our call to end the
>> use of plurality voting in governmental elections."
>>
>> Thank you Kristofer Munsterhjelm and Dave Ketchum for expressing your
>> desire to make the declaration stronger.
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> Yes, I could accept that, as it conveys what I was trying to get at :-)
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